this is my ten lines expereince of the day.
"I started my day with glancing at my clock beside my bed. It was still early. I dozed off back just because I could. The sun was shining brightly outside. it was going to be a good day. I woke up and had my shower with lots of bubbles from my shower cream. i always like my shower time. I sang and I danced in the shower. it was time to choose my wardrobe. Think! Think! sunshine outside, so no sweater for me."
I know it does not seem like not ten lines. But it is when I wrote it with my pencil. Seriously~
2 comments:
then what did u learn thru proofreading?
gimme some tips.
what proofreading? i didnt learn any.
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